listen, listen, eargasm glisten on measures divine
float the note in sequence of shattered time
strings and things tear at your mind
fade to flesh and sweat and grind
movement succulent and sublime
captive in the creeping octave vine
blue is the steel of my lover's shrine
piercing and cursing the spirit confined
shredding the bedding of my tomb maligned
upon my nectar he hath dined
tasting not wasting my tainted wine
lush the brush of his breath upon mine
anguish the voice at once raw and defined
tongue pierces eloquent design
fingers press upon my spine
no release, eternally entwinedinspired by the music of fade
whew...hot stuff...eargasm, ha nice...and the last 4 lines are smoking...great piece...
ReplyDeletemuch obliged, Brian :D
ReplyDeleteshameless plug - please hit the blue "fade" link for the OHP.... if you love progressive rock or rock in general, you'll love them :))
ReplyDeleteRhyme works overtime here, and lush is the only word for the effect.
ReplyDeleteOh this is a literary heat seeking missile. ;D Shah .X
ReplyDeletehttp://wordsinsync.blogspot.com/2011/08/monday-madness-linky-plus-poem-cyclic.html
Smoking and piercing hot ...
ReplyDeleteI like the sensual lines ~
omg loverly luscious comments <3
ReplyDeletethanks to all :)
You crafted the rhyme and tempo very well in this piece. It carried wonderful sensuality ~ Rose
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